Articles | Volume 26, issue 9
https://doi.org/10.5194/nhess-26-4503-2026
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Ballistic projectile hazard of major explosions and paroxysms at Stromboli (Italy) with uncertainty quantification – Part 2: Conditional and temporal probability maps
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-6540', Gianfilippo De Astis, 18 Mar 2026
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-6540', Anonymous Referee #2, 26 Jun 2026
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Augusto Neri, 29 Jul 2026
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ED: Publish as is (06 Aug 2026) by Amy Donovan
AR by Augusto Neri on behalf of the Authors (07 Sep 2026)
Finally, we have a paper with probability maps on this specific hazard (ballistic projectile) that is of considerable importance on Stromboli Island. And it's especially important for Stromboli citizens and tourists. After the reading, I think that the English used seems solid and structurally rigorous to me (but I'm not a native speaker). The paper has some limits intrinsecally related to the collected data and the methodological approach. However, the Authors of the article themselves clearly highlight their presence or some weaknesses. This is indicative of transparency and reliability. Very commendable and not really common among scientists. Anyway, these limits need to be re-considered and possibly reduced. In my opinion, they are the following:
a) Ineffectiveness in providing the areal density of projectiles, since the study simply calculates the probability that a given area will be hit by ballistic fallout in the event of a Major Explosion (ME) or paroxysm, but does not analyze the number of projectiles per unit area (areal density). Therefore, the results do not provide a direct measure of the probability that a person or a structure can be actually targeted or hit. This shortcoming is justified through the fact that the exact number of projectiles on the ground is rarely documented in historical accounts. The fact that another "companion paper" is cited as the main source from which these data are extracted doesn't allow me to fully understand the consistency of these assumptions and the breadth of sources consulted. In other words, may be, this point can be better clarified or more field-data could be considered. In addition, I ask if Andronico et al. (2021), Giordano and De Astis (2021), Bisson et al. (2023), Voloschina et Al. (2023) have deeply and very carefully considered? They are the most recent field-works done on major explosions and paroxysms, so… If not, please improve this topic. Also Pioli et Al. (2014) Geology 42(10), which is not present in the References, should be considered.
b) Limited observations and incomplete data (i.e., under-sampling), which means in other words that since the approach relies on the reconstruction of past events, the data suffers from a bias related to areas where it is easier to carry on surveys (such as beaten paths or inhabited areas). In less accessible areas of the island - such as the edges of the Sciara del Fuoco and the Sciara itself or Serro Capre and Vigna Vecchia or Serro Monaco etc. - there is a significant data gap. Although the authors introduced corrective statistical models (Models 2 and 3) to mitigate this problem, the original undersampling remains a flaw. c) Lack of physical and dynamic modeling, which therefore highlights as the study relies entirely on a statistical analysis of field observations, with no attention and reflection on the conditions of the explosive mixture at the source. We know that the two-types magmas involved in paroxysms (and rarely in ME) and their interaction before the events can play a great role in the eruptive dynamics. Also, no numerical models are used to describe the flight dynamics, impact angle or complex projectile trajectories. I believe that is an insurmountable point and where no improvements can be made, but it must be written very clearly. d) The parameter p, which represents the fraction of the number of paroxysms compared to the total number of explosive events (i.e. the sum of major explosions and paroxysms, right?), presents those strong doubts largely deriving from the complexity of the volcano eruptions during time and from the hard limits represented by lacking news/observations in the historical catalogues, over long periods. So, there is uncertainty in estimating this "p" ratio. The Authors assume a rate of 12% (based on data from 2003 to 2023), In this case, my question is: why not up to 2024, when another paroxysm occurred? Moreover, during the 2024 at least other 3 MEs occurred: have they been considered?. If the Authors acknowledge, as they write, that this value can vary dramatically due to the volcano's natural variability and the clustering effect of events over time, it should be considered the largest possible period, with available data until our days, not stopping at 2023. As far as, based on my knowledge, there were no MEs during 2025 but the most reliable number of MEs and paroxysms occurred until the pubblication of this paper is a point that cannot be circumvented in any way. e) Although the Authors acknowledged that this represents a potential uncertainty factor, addressed through statistics, they chose a single spatial reference point, i.e. the approximate center of the "Crater Terrace" (at about 750 m a.s.l.), as "origin". From here, all distances and fallout directions are measured, despite being clear that there are two dominant craters in the Stromboli eruptions: the NE and the SW. In my opinion, this approximation weakens the robustness of the hazard maps, although necessary. Furthermore, there are the morphology of Stromboli's two or three craters changing with time along with the geometry of the vents in the final 1-2 km. These two variables further influence volcanic hazard (and risk) because they strongly affect the structure of explosive jets and the direction of dispersion of ballistic projectiles. The problem is mitigated (in the paper) by the choice of the 3 Models and by the final focus on more cautious and conservative hazard maps, covering potentially threatened areas... However, despite: i) we can read in the Discussion this “enhances the robustness of the hazard maps against possible under-recording issues and unstationary behaviour of the volcanic system” and this is true; ii) we learn that the Model 3 approach does not privilege any specific direction and provides an "average" probability to include even areas totally under-recorded by documents, I think that the Conclusions do not give enough space to the concrete impact that the phenomenon studied may have.
Given that, is it possible in the Conclusions to explain in some point and/or show through a new Figure, one case or solution where, changing the quantification of at least one important sources of uncertainty (e.g. the crater position or another...), the hazard maps show a considerable variation? The goal should and would be to make more understandable and clearer to the reader how the scenario might change for one certain sector of the Island if we consider the variation of (just) one of the above mentioned parameter. The Authors may want to show in the Conclusions.
Another couple of things that I would like to see better written in the Conclusions are: at point one, the high vulnerability of Ginostra side (and village). Infact, the map shows that almost the entire village of Ginostra is hit with a probability greater than 20% for each single paroxysm; at point 2, according to Figure 4f the contour indicating a probability of 2% comes to cover almost the entire extension of the island, in case of paroxysms and that means that basically no area of the Island is free or shows 0 hazards with respect to being hit by ballistic bombs and blocks. Another final thing that could be highlighted in the Conclusions, if I understood correctly, is that in the probabilistic distribution of the next 50 years (MEs plus Paroxysms) the study expects 16 paroxysms to occur (with an increase, if the uncertain MEs were excluded).