Articles | Volume 25, issue 12
https://doi.org/10.5194/nhess-25-4767-2025
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Effective storm surge risk assessment and deep reinforcement learning based evacuation planning: a case study of Daya Bay Petrochemical Industrial Zone
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- Final revised paper (published on 01 Dec 2025)
- Preprint (discussion started on 27 Mar 2024)
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-2280', Anonymous Referee #1, 01 May 2024
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Chuanfeng Liu, 22 Jun 2024
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-2280', Anonymous Referee #2, 13 May 2024
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Chuanfeng Liu, 22 Jun 2024
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AR – Author's response | RR – Referee report | ED – Editor decision | EF – Editorial file upload
ED: Reconsider after major revisions (further review by editor and referees) (26 Jun 2024) by Liz Stephens
AR by Chuanfeng Liu on behalf of the Authors (22 Aug 2024)
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ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (28 Jan 2025) by Liz Stephens
RR by Anonymous Referee #3 (23 Mar 2025)
ED: Publish subject to minor revisions (review by editor) (29 Jul 2025) by Liz Stephens
AR by Chuanfeng Liu on behalf of the Authors (07 Aug 2025)
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ED: Publish as is (11 Sep 2025) by Liz Stephens
ED: Publish as is (12 Sep 2025) by Philip Ward (Executive editor)
AR by Chuanfeng Liu on behalf of the Authors (17 Sep 2025)
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This study proposes a method for Storm Surge Evacuation Planning using a coupled Deep Q-Network (DQN) model, ADCIRC, and SWAN models. However, the research appears more like a report rather than a scientific study, as many parts are not clearly explained. Therefore, a major revision is required. I would like to suggest the following improvements for the manuscript:
Introduction: authors discuss the differences between traditional methods and the DQN method. However, it is difficult for me to understand the specific benefits of using Deep Reinforcement Learning (DRL) to improve evacuation planning. It would be helpful to provide more information on how DRL can enhance the evacuation process, highlighting the innovation of this work.
Figures: There are too many figures, and most of them could benefit from more detailed information, and enhance the layout of the figures. For example, Fig. 1 and Fig. 4 could be merged into a single figure. Additionally, adding more descriptive captions to the figures would be beneficial.
Validation: It is unclear where the authors validate the ADCIRC and SWAN models using real historical disaster events. Usually there would be some QQplot for real tide gauges. Please provide information on the validation process and the results obtained.
Methodology: Page 23, Lines 365-375: This section seems to belong to the methodology rather than the results. Please consider moving it to the appropriate section.
It would be helpful to explain the relationship between the Markov Decision Process and the DQN algorithm in the text. This would ensure a smoother transition and better understanding for the readers.
Results: The results regarding the optimal evacuation paths are presented in a simple and unclear manner. Please provide additional information and clarification to improve the quality of the results section. It is important to avoid giving the impression of being careless or sloppy.
Title: Please use the full name "Deep Reinforcement Learning (DRL)" in the manuscript title to provide a more accurate representation of the study.
I hope these suggestions help in improving the manuscript. Please ensure there are no grammatical errors in the revised version.