Articles | Volume 25, issue 10
https://doi.org/10.5194/nhess-25-3905-2025
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the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.Indirect assimilation of radar reflectivity data with an adaptive hydrometer retrieval scheme for severe short-term weather forecasts
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- Final revised paper (published on 13 Oct 2025)
- Preprint (discussion started on 03 Feb 2025)
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RC1: 'Comment on nhess-2024-203', Anonymous Referee #1, 17 Mar 2025
- AC2: 'Reply on RC1', Lixin Song, 01 Jun 2025
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CC1: 'Comment on nhess-2024-203', Yi Wang, 19 Mar 2025
- AC1: 'Reply on CC1', Lixin Song, 01 Jun 2025
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RC2: 'Comment on nhess-2024-203', Zhen Peng, 21 Apr 2025
- AC3: 'Reply on RC2', Lixin Song, 01 Jun 2025
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AR: Author's response | RR: Referee report | ED: Editor decision | EF: Editorial file upload
ED: Reconsider after major revisions (further review by editor and referees) (02 Jun 2025) by Dan Li

AR by Lixin Song on behalf of the Authors (16 Jun 2025)
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ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (17 Jun 2025) by Dan Li
RR by Anonymous Referee #2 (07 Jul 2025)
ED: Publish as is (09 Jul 2025) by Dan Li
AR by Lixin Song on behalf of the Authors (17 Jul 2025)
Manuscript
The paper proposed an adaptive hydrometeor retrieval scheme that blends two existing methods for radar reflectivity assimilation: the “temperature-based” method and the “background hydrometer-dependent” method. The innovation lies in the development of a blending scheme that combines both methods adaptively, which helps to mitigate the limitations of each individual method. The topic is really interesting. However, some critical details should be further described. Here are my comments and suggestions.
Major comments
In case 2, the author did not conduct a quantitative evaluation of radar reflectivity or precipitation forecasts. A more thorough quantitative assessment could be provided to better validate the performances of the different retrieval schemes.
The description of the background hydrometer-dependent method is not clear, particularly regarding key implementation details. For example, it is unclear how the radar reflectivity threshold intervals are defined, what sample size is used for the background statistics, and how the climatological data are calculated. Providing more details in these aspects can help to enhance the reproducibility and transparency of the method.
The last paragraph of the introduction provides only a superficial listing of each section’s content. To improve the clarity and effectiveness of the paper, it is recommended to expand on the role of each section. Elaborate on how they contribute to the overall narrative and objectives of the research, which will help readers gain a clearer understanding of the study’s scope and significance.
The writing needs further improvement. It is recommended that the authors engage a professional editor or a native English speaker to proofread it, which would significantly boost the clarity and coherence of the manuscript.
Minor comments
Abstract: The abstract does not explicitly address the impact of thermodynamic and dynamic structures on the forecast results. Given that the evolution of convective systems is closely related to environmental thermodynamics and dynamics (e.g., vertical velocity and wind shear), including a brief statement on how the proposed method enhances key thermodynamic structures would make the abstract more comprehensive.
Line 48: Please rephrase this sentence “the EXP_temp-bg experiment predict the radar reflectivity structures and precipitation intensity more accurately”
Line 254: spelling mistake: “producess” → “produces”
Line 344: “1-h, 3-h, and 5-h forecasts valid at 2100 UTC 06 August 2018 for EXP_temp”?
Section 2: Please use the style requirements of American Meteorological Society uniformly in words, formulas and charts. For example, single-character variables should be italicized; Use non-italic bold for vectors or matrices.
Section 2.3 L148~154: Does α and a represent the same variable?
Section 2.3.3: Equations (9) and (10) defining the blending scheme lack a clear explanation of how the weighting factors are determined.
Section 2.3.3: What is the weight meaning β for? It needs more description.
Section 3: The paper mentions the use of radar observations but does not provide sufficient details on the quality control procedures.
Section 3: The observation error statistics estimated and used in DA determine the increment field for given innovations. Quantitative details of these statistics are crucial for understanding DA results but are not provided. Also, a more detailed description of the experiment design is required.
Section 4: In the Fig. 6 and Fig. 12, the wind speed scale needs to be given in the lower right corner of the figure, and the length of the wind vector indicates the wind speed, and the unit is how much.
Section 4.2: Where is the cross section shown in Figure 12?
Section 5: The conclusion mentions using dual-polarization radar in future studies, but does not elaborate on how this would be integrated into the current framework. Providing more details on potential improvements or challenges would strengthen the future outlook.
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