Articles | Volume 24, issue 11
https://doi.org/10.5194/nhess-24-4031-2024
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Dynamic projections of extreme sea levels for western Europe based on ocean and wind-wave modelling
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ED: Reconsider after major revisions (further review by editor and referees) (24 Sep 2024) by Philip Ward
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ED: Reconsider after major revisions (further review by editor and referees) (26 Sep 2024) by Philip Ward
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AR by Alisée Chaigneau on behalf of the Authors (07 Oct 2024)
The paper uses a dynamic modelling approach that accounts for the different extreme total water level components (mean sea level, tides, storm surges, waves) and some of the non-linear interactions between them. The analysis is performed using one way coupling of a 3D ocean circulation model which captures MSL, tides, and meteorological surge and a wave model (forced with the same atmospheric data and considering water levels from the ocean circulation model). The analysis is conducted for the period 1970 to 2100 and non-stationary extreme value analysis is applied and compared to results from using the simplified “static” approach (or “MSL offset method"). Given the important of changes in extreme coastal water levels in driving changes in coastal flood risk, the analysis adds valuable new insights in terms of which methods are suitable in which regions. I add some major and several minor comments below which need to be addressed to make the manuscript publishable.
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19 “significant” in a statistical sense? If so which significance level? If not ina statistical sense I suggest changing and not using the term in a paper like this where statistical significance is also a big part
34-37 what about freshwater discharge?
97 return levels
115-120 Would the model resolve changes in (coastal) tides as a result of SLR or is it too coarse?
137 after runoff there is a closing bracket but no opening one
153 types
173-201 Somewhere it should be highlighted that a “direct” method is used which fits the GPD to the still water levels which include (often large) deterministic tide signals as opposed to the more appropriate “indirect” methods such as SSJPM where the stochastic surge/wave part is analyzed with the extreme value models and combined with the tides.
198 see my first major comment, it needs to be explained how those confidence levels are derived exactly
Fig. 2 Is that a real example or just (used as) a sketch? If it’s a real example it would be good to mention whether it uses the static or dynamic approach.
242 The German Bight is equally (if not even more) complex than the Dutch coast.
266 This seems to be quite relevant, what is the reason for not including it in the main manuscript?
Fig. 4 Related to my point about uncertainties it would be interesting here to show the ranges of years including the distribution uncertainties and also see where those ranges overlap between SSPs and where they don’t
278 This related to my comment above about changes in tides and whether they can actually be resolved along the coast
325 lead to