This manuscript gathers together seismic, infrasound, GNSS and meteorological data for a  rainfall episode in Romania in late August 2024. The authors claim that this approach can lead to a “holistic understanding of storm evolution”; however, I can not see in the manuscript which is the contribution of putting together these different kind of datasets to such a better understanding. In my opinion, the manuscript only shows that strong rainfall episodes can be identified in seismic, infrasound and GNSS data, a fact that is widely known.

In my opinion, this work do not deserve publication in a high-rated journal as NHESS: my most important concerns have to do with:

1)  The real contribution of analyzing different dataset to a better understanding of the storm evolution is not really explained

2) I think that having access to direct measurements of meteorological parameters is an essential point for this kind of studies . In this contribution, the detailed seismic or infrasonic data is compared to 1-hour long estimations of rainfall derived from large-scale models. Why not to compare each seismic/infrasound station with the closer meteorological site??

3) The authors state in the introduction that the precipitation totals reached values of 120-220 mm, corresponding to an exceptional episode. However, the total precipitation graphics in Figures 4 and 5 show maximum hourly values not reaching 3.5 mm, for a total amount of precipitation of about 30-40 mm, values that would correspond to a modest rainfall episode. I guess that this probably arise from the use of a general precipitation model, but I think that it do not makes sense to discuss the correlation of different datasets to non-representative meteorological variables.

4) Meteorological data is reduced to the ERAS global precipitation model. The possible contribution of wind to seismic and infrasound noise or the relationship between humidity and GNSS-derived water content is not commented at all.

5) The correlation between different parameters is only discussed qualitatively all along the manuscript, and in some cases it is unclear. I have the feeling that all along the discussion, only those results leading to “positive” correlations are commented, ignoring those showing contradictions. Some examples include:

• the main peak in precipitation in Fig 4 a matches pretty well the seismic amplitudes, but neither of the other peaks have a good correlation (just overriding panels a and c this becomes evident)
• panels a) and b) in Fig. 8 show a clear similarity, but panel c) has a different peak and panel d) a very different pattern; this is not discussed in the text
• The purple clusters in Fig. 9 b) correspond to very different precipitation values; again, this is not commented/discussed, just stating that “These segments exhibit clear matches’ with storm evolution”
• The area encompassing more lightning strikes in Fig. 10, (located to the SW of AGIR) has a low number of detections and no backazimuthal determination seems to be calculated form inland strikes
• Is is hard to detect any trend in the colored points in Fig 11b

6) The authors claim that using K-means clustering has been a “key aspect of the analysis”. However, it is difficult for me to see which are these aspects. In Fig. 9, I would say that the spectrogram contains much more information that the clustering graph. Besides, no explanation on how and why the parameters of this clustering have been chosen

7) Concerning seismic data, during years a discussion has been open between those relating the microseismic peak amplitudes to air pressure or oceanic waves. However, it is now widely accepted that the amplitude of the microseismic peak is related to oceanic waves. On contrary, it is less clear which is the contribution of open waters and coastal zones to the primary and secondary peaks. If the amplitudes of the microseismic peak is discussed, this is the subject that should considered; Figures 6 and 7 just document that during stormy days,  the microseismic noise is higher; this is a well-knonw feature, which could be observed in most of the seismic stations distributed worldwide

8) Concerning infrasound data, no explanation of which is the utility of  parameters as spectral centroid, flux etc. is provided. Non-specialist readers need to know if these are parameters routinely calculated to discuss specific characteristics of the signal. The close relationship between infrasound and seismic data, widely documented my many contributions, is not commented at all.

9) The authors do not seem to be aware that the infrasound recordings related to lightning are in fact the acoustic waves generated by the associated thunders. Different works, including some of those included in the manuscript references list, have showed that the acoustic waves generated by thunders are recorded systematically by nearby seismic stations.

10) If seismic and infrasound data is used, the contribution of other sources of vibration and/or sound should be considered; which is the contribution of anthropogenic noise to each of the stations?

In my opinion, if the manuscript goal is to prove that the integration of multiple sensors has a clear utility to study storm evolution, much work is needed, including a better analysis of the existing data and a modelling effort. The work done by the authors can be useful to show that a strong storm can be detected not only by meteorological instruments but also by other sensors. However, this is something that is well-known by researches in each of the different fields and, in my opinion, does not deserve publication in NHESS.

The manuscript presents a multi-sensor case study of the August 2024 Black Sea storm using seismic, infrasound, GNSS-derived PWV, and MTG-Lightning Imager, with ERA5. The concept is strong and relevant. However, quantitative validation, methodological transparency, and operational feasibility need to be strengthened before publication. A clear, reproducible verification procedure is necessary

Major comments

1) Seismic–rainfall linkage remains qualitative

Section 4.1 shows >30 Hz seismic envelopes and spectrograms and network snapshots that visually vary with ERA5 precipitation, but the evidence is descriptive. To increase credibility, the relation should be verified against independent observations (rain gauges and/or radar), with objective statistical metrics. Because the paper claims this as potentially useful for early warning, it would also help to outline a minimal streaming detection approach.

2) Infrasound-lightning linkage lacks association statistics

PMCC detections rise during the event and coincide qualitatively with MTG-LI flashes. A concise matching procedure together with summary statistics is necessary for a quantitative evidence.

3) K-means clustering (k = 7)?

The 30-min infrasound feature set is reasonable, yet the fixed choice of k = 7 is not justified. 

4) ERA5 as verification?

ERA5 provides useful meteorological background but should not be treated as ground truth for validating other sensors, particularly for localized coastal extremes. Verification should rely on observational datasets (gauges, radar, wave/tide sensors where relevant).

6) Methodological transparency and reproducibility.

Key processing details are missing. Parameters for seismic and PMCC processing can improve reproducibility. 

7) Section numbering.

Results currently contain two “4.1” subsections, followed by “4.4.” Consistent renumbering and updated cross-references are needed.

Minor comments

Fig. 4: “Tiem series” → “Time series”.

Figs. 4–5: add axis units on all panels; include uncertainty shading or a baseline/reference line for the high-frequency envelope.

Fig. 11 (GNSS): include a colorbar with units (mm) and state the exact day used for “a day before”; consider annotating station IDs (coastal vs. inland).

L305: capitalize and format time as “August 29, 00:00 UTC.”

Reduce phrases like “illustrating a correlation” or “supports a causal relationship” unless statistics are provided; use neutral wording if results remain qualitative.

Ensure consistent capitalization of months and first-use expansion of abbreviations (PWV, PMCC, LI).

If terms like “record-breaking” or “extreme” are used, add brief quantitative context (percentiles/ranks) or soften the phrasing.