Articles | Volume 25, issue 9
https://doi.org/10.5194/nhess-25-3505-2025
© Author(s) 2025. This work is distributed under
the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.Predicting Soil Salinity in the Red River Delta (Vietnam) Using Machine Learning and Assessing Farmers' Adaptive Capacity
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- Final revised paper (published on 22 Sep 2025)
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-1051', Anonymous Referee #1, 13 May 2025
- AC2: 'Reply on RC1', Nguyen Huu Duy, 12 Jun 2025
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2025-1051', Anonymous Referee #2, 13 May 2025
- AC1: 'Reply on RC2', Nguyen Huu Duy, 12 Jun 2025
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ED: Reconsider after major revisions (further review by editor and referees) (13 Jun 2025) by Paolo Tarolli

AR by Nguyen Huu Duy on behalf of the Authors (13 Jun 2025)
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ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (04 Jul 2025) by Paolo Tarolli
RR by Anonymous Referee #2 (06 Jul 2025)

RR by Aurora Ghirardelli (08 Aug 2025)

ED: Publish subject to technical corrections (14 Aug 2025) by Paolo Tarolli

AR by Nguyen Huu Duy on behalf of the Authors (18 Aug 2025)
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The manuscript entitled "Farmers' adaptive capacity towards soil salinity effects using hybrid machine learning in the Red River Delta" presents a timely and relevant study that integrates machine learning techniques with socio-economic analysis to assess both the spatial distribution of soil salinity and the adaptive capacity of farmers in a climate-vulnerable region. The study employs a suite of hybrid models combining XGBoost with various optimization algorithms (POA, STO, SOA, PSO, GOA), along with remote sensing data and household surveys, to deliver a comprehensive framework for analyzing the dual dimensions of environmental stress and human response. The article conforms to the journal-specific instructions and the topic fits well with the scope of the journal and proposes an innovative approach. While the article is generally well-structured and balanced, some key methodological details are missing. In particular, key details are missing regarding land use categorization in the study area and the rationale for selecting specific remote sensing indices and optimization algorithms. Additionally, although the findings related to farmers' adaptive capacity are insightful, they are presented largely in isolation from the machine learning analysis, with minimal integration between the two parts of the study. Furthermore, the Discussion section would benefit from a more critical engagement with existing literature, particularly studies that have applied similar optimization algorithms in environmental or agricultural contexts.
Detailed comments on each section are provided below.
Title
The current title may not accurately reflect the study’s output. In the present status, the study does not use machine learning to assess farmer’s adaptive capacity, but rather to predict soil salinization. The title should be reconsidered and rephrased to avoid any misleading interpretations.
Astract
The abstract is complete and gives a clear idea of the content without reading the paper.
Minor comments.
Introduction
Overall, the introduction covers the state of the art and explains the objectives of the study in a complete way. However, several acronyms and abbreviations are introduced here without first presenting their full forms. I recommend carefully reviewing the Introduction, and the manuscript as a whole, for consistency in defining all acronyms upon first use. Minor comments:
L42: Use “posing” instead of “poses”.
L51: Please rephrase “represent an extremely key role”.
L126: This passage would be more suitable for the final remarks (Conclusion) that the Introduction.
Materials and methods
The section is clearly structured into different sub-sections and easy to follow. However, some key information is unclear or missing:
Minor comments:
L133: Please remove “with the”.
L144: Replace “obtained at” with “reach”.
L165.166: Where are the soil sapling points located exactly?
L185: Please translate “extractés à partir de l’image” into English.
L221: Please define what a Tan commune is.
L223: There is an extra comma “is, often”.
L306 and onwards: Proposed by proposed by Kennedy and Eberhart (1995). Please check the reference style of similar citations throughout the manuscript.
Results
The results are clear and concise. As stated above, there is poor integration between the machine learning analysis and the socio-economic analysis. Minor comments:
L395: What questions are asked in the interviews? (see comment above)
L401: The passage “changing the crop structure” is unclear. Please rephrase.
L472: There is a typo here “the 2soil salinity”.
Discussion
The Discussion section addresses the main findings of the study, particularly the performance of the hybrid XGBoost models and the socio-economic insights from the farmer interviews. However, it falls short in a few critical areas that limit the depth and broader relevance of the study's conclusions:
Minor comments:
L499-509: This paragraphs contains repetitions of already stated concepts. Perhaps it could be shortened.
L586: Please rephrase the sentence.
Conclusions
The conclusions are clear and well-balanced. However, I would recommend clearly stating the future steps to fill the existing gaps.