Articles | Volume 24, issue 3
https://doi.org/10.5194/nhess-24-737-2024
© Author(s) 2024. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
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Nearshore tsunami amplitudes across the Maldives archipelago due to worst-case seismic scenarios in the Indian Ocean
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- Final revised paper (published on 05 Mar 2024)
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RC1: 'Comment on nhess-2022-95', Anonymous Referee #1, 27 Apr 2022
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Shuaib Rasheed, 11 Jun 2022
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RC2: 'Comment on nhess-2022-95', Joern Behrens, 28 Apr 2022
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Shuaib Rasheed, 11 Jun 2022
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ED: Reconsider after major revisions (further review by editor and referees) (21 Jun 2022) by Shane Murphy
AR by Shuaib Rasheed on behalf of the Authors (02 Aug 2022)
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ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (18 Nov 2022) by Shane Murphy
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ED: Reconsider after major revisions (further review by editor and referees) (06 Dec 2022) by Shane Murphy
AR by Shuaib Rasheed on behalf of the Authors (18 Jan 2023)
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ED: Publish as is (16 Jun 2023) by Ira Didenkulova (Executive editor)
AR by Shuaib Rasheed on behalf of the Authors (26 Jun 2023)
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This reviewer would like to commend the authors on their work. Efforts associated with quantifying tsunami hazards/vulnerability is a welcome addition and this work represents first of its kind tsunami simulations for the Maldives archipelago. Further, I would particularly like to commend their efforts on providing an online server to access the results, as stated by the authors this will be of great benefit to the wider community.
However, before I can recommend this paper for publication I would encourage the authors to engage with the feedback and comments provided below.
Main Comments
Line by Line Comments
Section 1.
Line 25: Rephrase ``These data imply …”
Line 30 - 35: It might be worth mentioning the return periods of some of the findings
Line 38: Please expand on the ``safe island concept” for those who are unaware of it.
Line 41-42: Rephrase ``impacted less and others being impacted more”
Lines 50-55: Please make reference of [Xie 2019], where a tsunami hazard assessment of the Xisha Archipelago was carried out.
Section 2.
Line 102: Typo ``Boxing Day even” should be ``Boxing Day event”
Line 113: Typo ``Table 1” should be ``Table 2”
Line 113: Rephrase ``worst most-likely”
Section 2.2: It would be good to make reference to Figure 1, which showcases the location of the various sources
Section 2.3: It appears that this section is a direct copy of a section in the authors previous works [Rasheed, 2021 (a) and Rasheed, 2021 (b)].
Line 150: Units for kinematic viscosity
Line 152: I would suggest introducing tau and rho here instead of on Line 160. Please also make reference to that fact that the value of n will be discussed in section 2.3.4.
Line 153: Please provide a further explanation for the P^{DG}_1 - P^{DG}_1 term.
Comment: Has the Thetis model in this set up been validated against traditional tsunami benchmark problems? If not I would suggest taking a look at the problems outlined in [https://nctr.pmel.noaa.gov/benchmark/].
Line 166: ``Each simulation was run in a full simulation which spatially extended ..” It is not clear from this sentence how the nested simulations were carried out, please clarify this.
Line 166-167: Reorder the Figure numbers, ``Figures 2 (a) and 1 (a)” and ``Figures 2 (b) and 1 (b)”.
Line 171-173: The authors state that the tidal variation of 1m is ``very small” and can therefore be discounted however in later sections they state ``If combined with a high tide, tsunamis generated from scenario 2a would likely have an impact across locations predicted to have higher amplitudes”. I would agree with the later and state that tidal forcing can play a role in inundation levels. Not including tidal forcing in the study is acceptable but please correct this section and make note of the limitation in section 4.3 (Limitations of the Study and Recommendations for Improvement).
Figure 1: Please increase the size of Figure 1 (b). It is difficult to make out the high resolution features. Please also ensure that all x and y axis are labelled.
Figure 1: Typo in the caption ``13 orth Nilandhe” and ``20. ddu Atoll”.
Figure 2: Please make the subplot (b) larger and label the axis correctly.
Section 2.3.5: How are the full and higher resolution mesh merged? From reading it appears there is a mismatch in mesh resolution at the boundaries, with the full mesh having a resolution of 5km to 7.5km while the nested mesh has a resolution of 10km at the boundaries. Please provide some details on nested procedure.
Section 3.
Figure 3: Please make subplots (a) and (b) larger. There appears to be an artefact of the nesting in the bottom right of both subplots (a) and (b). The bottom right corner exhibits some high wave heights which exhibit a discontinuous drop-off when moving in a north western direction. Is this physical or an artefact of the nesting?
Section 3.1.2: Why have you chosen a Pearson correlation coefficient? Would a RMSE value be more appropriate? Please explain.
Lines 260 -266: This appears to be a one sided comparison. What about the areas of low impact? Do the simulated and observed areas of low impacts also match up? This is an equally interesting comparison.
Figure 4. It might be useful to provide a map showing where these subplots are located in the Maldives. Please provide a wave height scale and label the axis for each subplot.
Figure 6 and 7: Typo ``worst case fault case”
Section 4.
Lines 347-349: Are the refraction, diffraction and reflection patterns repeated across different simulated sources? Please comment on this.
Figure 8: Mark the Atolls (South Nilande, Mulaku and Kolhumadula) in subplot (a). Please re-plot with the wave height coloring centred on 0m. It may be interesting to see reflections etc.
Line 352: Please reference the work of [Reymond, 2012], where the role of reef systems on the amplification of tsunami waves is captured as a site specific amplification parameter.
Lines 353-357: Please rephrase this sentence.
Line 372: Can you please qualify ``with high tsunami flow velocities across the shallow and narrow channels”, as there are no plots explicitly showing this behaviour.
Section 4.2: As stated above I highly commend the authors for providing the online explorer. However the links do not work and I was unable to access the server. Please correct this.
Line 450: The following work should be cited as an additional approach for investigating uncertainties [Giles, 2021]. In that work the uncertainty on the source is propagated to maximum wave heights using cheap statistical emulators.
Section 5.
Line 456-457: The statement ``variability in the resulting tsunami amplitudes due to the development of complex refraction and reflection wave patterns” should be qualified with further results such as those shown in section 4.1
To finish I would like to reiterate my commendation of the authors efforts and appreciate that my main comments listed above may be deemed harsh. However, if the high resolution data is available I would encourage the authors to re simulate at a higher resolution.
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