Articles | Volume 24, issue 7
https://doi.org/10.5194/nhess-24-2541-2024
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Modelling crop hail damage footprints with single-polarization radar: the roles of spatial resolution, hail intensity, and cropland density
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- Final revised paper (published on 25 Jul 2024)
- Preprint (discussion started on 05 Dec 2023)
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-2598', Rob Warren, 12 Jan 2024
- AC1: 'Reply to RC1 and RC2', Raphael Portmann, 15 Mar 2024
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-2598', Tomeu Rigo, 18 Feb 2024
- AC1: 'Reply to RC1 and RC2', Raphael Portmann, 15 Mar 2024
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ED: Reconsider after major revisions (further review by editor and referees) (27 Mar 2024) by Olivier Dewitte
AR by Raphael Portmann on behalf of the Authors (04 Apr 2024)
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ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (25 Apr 2024) by Olivier Dewitte
RR by Tomeu Rigo (01 May 2024)
RR by Rob Warren (03 May 2024)
ED: Publish subject to technical corrections (21 May 2024) by Olivier Dewitte
AR by Raphael Portmann on behalf of the Authors (29 May 2024)
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This study uses single-polarisation radar observations and high-resolution insurance data to develop a model relating the Maximum Expected Severe Hail Size (MESHS) diagnostic to crop hail damage. A detailed investigation is performed into the sensitivity of the model performance to data resolution, highlighting important differences between field crops and grapevine, which are linked to their differing spatial distribution. The impact of variations in MESHS threshold and the minimum crop field density used to define exposure are also explored.
I was really impressed with this paper. It is well written and scientifically rigorous, with high-quality figures and appropriate discussion of relevant literature. I particularly appreciated the detailed analysis of how spatial resolution and cropland density impact the different verification metrics. I think this will be an invaluable reference for future studies of hail-related damage to crops and other assets. As such I have no hesitation in recommending it for publication, subject to some minor revisions. There are a couple of issues related to the use of radar data for detecting hail that I would like to see briefly discussed in the paper. These are noted below, together with a few other substantive comments. Beyond this, I have numerous suggests for minor textual and grammatical changes, as well as adjustments to some of the figures. Rather than listing these all out, I have provided an annotated PDF (see attached). I thank the authors for their efforts in putting this work together and encourage them to reach out to me via email should they have any questions regarding my review.
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Rob Warren, Bureau of Meteorology, Melbourne, Australia