Articles | Volume 24, issue 6
https://doi.org/10.5194/nhess-24-1937-2024
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Climatic characteristics of the Jianghuai cyclone and its linkage with precipitation during the Meiyu period from 1961 to 2020
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- Final revised paper (published on 11 Jun 2024)
- Preprint (discussion started on 27 Oct 2023)
Interactive discussion
Status: closed
Comment types: AC – author | RC – referee | CC – community | EC – editor | CEC – chief editor
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-2008', Anonymous Referee #1, 13 Dec 2023
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AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Ran Zhu, 26 Dec 2023
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RC2: 'Reply on AC1', Anonymous Referee #1, 28 Dec 2023
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AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Ran Zhu, 29 Dec 2023
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RC3: 'Reply on AC2', Anonymous Referee #1, 30 Dec 2023
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AC3: 'Reply on RC3', Ran Zhu, 06 Jan 2024
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RC4: 'Reply on AC3', Anonymous Referee #1, 08 Jan 2024
- AC4: 'Reply on RC4', Ran Zhu, 09 Jan 2024
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RC4: 'Reply on AC3', Anonymous Referee #1, 08 Jan 2024
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AC3: 'Reply on RC3', Ran Zhu, 06 Jan 2024
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RC3: 'Reply on AC2', Anonymous Referee #1, 30 Dec 2023
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AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Ran Zhu, 29 Dec 2023
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RC2: 'Reply on AC1', Anonymous Referee #1, 28 Dec 2023
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AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Ran Zhu, 26 Dec 2023
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RC5: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-2008', Anonymous Referee #1, 09 Jan 2024
- AC5: 'Reply on RC5', Ran Zhu, 10 Jan 2024
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RC6: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-2008', Anonymous Referee #2, 08 Mar 2024
- AC6: 'Reply on RC6', Ran Zhu, 21 Mar 2024
Peer review completion
AR – Author's response | RR – Referee report | ED – Editor decision | EF – Editorial file upload
ED: Reconsider after major revisions (further review by editor and referees) (10 Apr 2024) by Maria-Carmen Llasat
AR by Ran Zhu on behalf of the Authors (11 Apr 2024)
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ED: Referee Nomination & Report Request started (07 May 2024) by Maria-Carmen Llasat
RR by Anonymous Referee #2 (08 May 2024)
RR by Anonymous Referee #1 (13 May 2024)
ED: Publish as is (14 May 2024) by Maria-Carmen Llasat
AR by Ran Zhu on behalf of the Authors (21 May 2024)
Manuscript
This manuscript analyses Jianghuai cyclones during the Meiyu period using ERA5 reanalysis data. It explores cyclone characteristics, genesis locations, and tracks, establishing a positive correlation between intensity, radius, and interdecadal variations. The study emphasizes the link between cyclone activity and Yangtze River precipitation. Spatially, abnormal precipitation patterns are identified, tracing the evolution of geopotential height anomalies and water vapor flux.
The results presented in this paper are both interesting and significant, as the study delves into understanding the complex dynamics of Jianghuai cyclones and their impact on regional precipitation. While the methodology employed by the authors appears sound, there are a few areas that require revision. For example, I think it is advisable to provide more details on the parameters and statistical analyses to enhance a deeper understanding of how the results are obtained and the derived conclusions. Also, the manuscript mentions the positive correlation between cyclone activity and precipitation but does not delve into the causal mechanisms. These considerations, and the ones below, are important for a more compelling paper, and while they currently prevent me from giving my full endorsement for publication in its current state, I eagerly anticipate reviewing a revised version.
Below, I am giving an account of more specific comments and suggestions.
Abstract: The current abstract resembles a list of outcomes instead of a storyline, so it might benefit from a stronger overarching structure that seamlessly connects the climatological characteristics of Jianghuai cyclones, their correlation with precipitation in the Yangtze River region, and the atmospheric anomalies associated with their activity.
Section 1: Please provide a more extensive description of the Meiyu front and period as they represent specific manifestations of the East Asian monsoon that may not be widely recognized worldwide.
Adding a map to illustrate the location of Yangtze River, Jianghuai, and its surrounding provinces/regions would enhance the reader's understanding of the geographical context. It could also include the Meiyu front location. This visual aid would be valuable for situating the study area and providing context for readers who may not be familiar with the region.
L.39. I think there might be a typo: floors -> floods?
L.117. Please specify that the “National Meteorological Information Center” is part of the “China Meteorological Administration” to avoid confusions with similar institutions from other countries.
Section 2.2: The description of tracking methods is presented at a technical level without a comparative analysis of their strengths and weaknesses. A more descriptive approach would offer insights into why the chosen method is ideal for this study, providing a more comprehensive methodological evaluation.
L.154. It could be interesting to add a rectangle that illustrates this region, possibly incorporating it into the new figure.
L. 165. When referring to the frequency of occurrence, what are the units? From the numbers, I would say that it refers to the total number of cyclones during the Meiyu period from 1961 to 2020. Please specify in the text, here and hereafter, and add to figures and/or figure captions as well.
L.245. Please add the definition of “Meiyu intensity index” as it is not defined in the text. It is important to know how this index is defined to be able to fully follow and understand the discussions where it is used.
L.225, and so on. The term “anomaly/anomalies” is used throughout the text without explicitly defining it. I guess it takes the whole Meiyu period from 1961 to 2020 as the base state; however, it is not defined in the text. Please do.
L. 334 -344. Are these results from the present study and backed up by the references provided or are the results of the references? Please clarify.
Section 4: It is advisable to briefly mention potential directions for future research, identifying unexplored questions and areas for further study to build upon the presented findings. For example, the specific mechanism of the southwest jet's influence could be further analyzed and researched.
Fig. 1: It would be beneficial to have the same size in both subfigures. In the caption, I think the parentheses containing two sentences should be integrated as part of the text.
Fig. 2: I would change the y-labels to "Number of cyclones" for easier interpretation at first glance. Additionally, the units of intensity are hard to read in the figures. Consider enlarging the figures or adjusting their layout to improve visibility.
Fig. 3: I don’t understand what “Point” in figure b means. Please clarify or correct.
Fig. 4, 6: I think “Number” in the y-labels refers to the “number of cyclones per year”. Please add and specify both in the caption and the text.
Fig. 7 and 8: Again, consider enlarging the figures or adjusting their layout to improve visibility.
Also, please consider relocating the "T test" specification to the main text when discussing confidence levels, rather than including it in the figure captions. Include it the first time it is mentioned and subsequent times if you deemed necessary or use the hereafter expression.
Please, review the text and figure captions to explicitly specify the units of the magnitudes.