Articles | Volume 23, issue 8
https://doi.org/10.5194/nhess-23-2895-2023
© Author(s) 2023. This work is distributed under the Creative Commons Attribution 4.0 License.
Avalanche size estimation and avalanche outline determination by experts: reliability and implications for practice
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- Final revised paper (published on 30 Aug 2023)
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RC1: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-586', Ivan Moner, 29 May 2023
- AC1: 'Reply on RC1', Elisabeth D. Hafner, 27 Jun 2023
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RC2: 'Comment on egusphere-2023-586', Brian Lazar, 07 Jun 2023
- AC2: 'Reply on RC2', Elisabeth D. Hafner, 27 Jun 2023
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ED: Publish subject to minor revisions (review by editor) (03 Jul 2023) by Pascal Haegeli
AR by Elisabeth D. Hafner-Aeschbacher on behalf of the Authors (14 Jul 2023)
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ED: Publish subject to minor revisions (review by editor) (21 Jul 2023) by Pascal Haegeli
AR by Elisabeth D. Hafner-Aeschbacher on behalf of the Authors (24 Jul 2023)
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ED: Publish as is (25 Jul 2023) by Pascal Haegeli
AR by Elisabeth D. Hafner-Aeschbacher on behalf of the Authors (26 Jul 2023)
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The article deals with a subject of great interest in my opinion, both for the public and for snow and avalanche practitioners. It does so in a very structured way, providing new data that are treated with appropriate and rigorous statistical methods.
The methods used are explained at length, and these lead to clear results, from which important and well-justified conclusions are derived. The methods and techniques used would allow the study to be reproduced if this were of interest.
Both the title and the abstract perfectly reflect the content of the article and are easy to understand. Formulae, symbols and abbreviations are correctly explained. The same applies to the references, which are well documented.
The article is well-structured and clear. As it deals with three different experiments, it is quite long, but this is justified. Most of the figures are easy to interpret, except for Figures 2 and 3, which are practically illegible due to the small size of the fonts and photos. We suggest increasing the size of the font and photos, at the cost of eliminating the "medium size" graphics, which are also not thoroughly worked into the text.
Overall, the article is written in clear, well-structured and simple English.
In our opinion the article can be published as is, but if you wish you can take into account the following comments:
- Line 114: We find it more appropriate to speak of "public forecasting" than "regional forecasting".
- Line 121: We are a bit surprised to find 10 responses in Spain and not having known about this study before. Knowing which organizations in each country were surveyed would give information on the quality of the survey.
- Line 124: In Study 2 the sample of 9 people is obviously small. The uniform background of the respondents further weakens the results. The same happens in Study 3. The need to improve this with a larger sample could be pointed out in the conclusions.
- Line 138: Delete the first comma
- Line 190: Figure 1a, which does not exist, is cited.
- Figure 5: We are very surprised by the result shown in this figure, in which the destructive potential is the least valued of the factors. The possible causes of this anomaly are briefly discussed in the text.
- Figure A1 does not seem relevant to us
In any case, congratulations on the work done, it is excellent to us!