dear Authors

after carefully revising your paper and the discussion, we believe that your manuscript is of potential interest to the journal but not ready for publication.
A significant improvement could be reached by introducing major changes which, according to the referee's reports, should mainly focus on:

1. Modifying the paper structure by reducing the introduction, increasing the geological and geomorphological description of the test site, separating results from the discussion and modifying the methods section, as well.

2. Rewriting the abstract so it is self-contained and can stand alone

3. The methods used and the procedural steps are not adequately described. It seems that the approach you follow is not clear and could not be based on robust standards. Could you please explain and improve this section?

4. Introducing some quantitative approach to validate the efficiency of your method

5. As a side (but important) issue: I would personally advise against using the expression "radar Induced factors" both in the title and in the text. Radar methods are mainly a measuring tool and it is very unlikely that they will be able to induce any landscape factor or to modify it.

Please consider that your responses and modifications to the manuscript will need a new revision round, so please carefully reply to all questions and requests from the referees one by one.
Also, please be aware that this preliminary willingness to reconsider the paper after major revisions does not in any way imply that there is any guarantee that the paper will be accepted in the next phase.

I am looking forward to receiving your revised work,
best regards
FC

dear Authors

after your last revisions the paper has greatly improved and it is now almost ready for publication provided that you are willing to add a few minor modifications as highlighted in the attached referee's report.
Once those have been added please resubmit the revised version as soon as possible for a last Editor's check.
After that, you will be directly addressed to the editorial system.
Thanks for your efforts and work,
best regards
FC

dear Authors

I am pleased to tell you that your paper, after the last modifications, is now ready for publication.
This will imply to go directly to the editing procedure after you receive communication from NHESS Editorial Office, shortly.
Thank you for publishing with NHESS and congratulations,

my best regards
Filippo Catani